Need editing/translation advice/criticism for Girls Und Panzer 4komaPosted on: 03/29/17 02:32PM
gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3621415A rough translation:
ボゴボゴアリスちゃん
Bogobogo Alice-chan
宴会中
During the party
なんか盛り上 がらねーな!
This party isn’t lively enough!
ちびっ子!
Little girl!
漫才やつ!
Comedy duo!
ー緒に漫才するで!!
Let’s do a comedy act!!
やだ
No chance!
き、ぱり
(Need help on this one)
なんでやねんっ!!
What nonsense!!!
あ~よしよし
Ah how nice
後でこいつ殺しとこますんで!!
I’ll kill you later!!
I would appreciate criticism and corrections for my translation. It's my first time translating a comedy strip, I feel a bit out of my depth.