Anonymous commented at 2011-05-03 17:37:28 » #718892

Dude, this moment already screams PERFECT. No need for filthy men there.

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Anonymous commented at 2011-05-14 15:14:56 » #733549

No I do agree, there is a slight imperfection here, and that is tohsaka's skirt. If it were pulled up just a little bit more...

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Ultima_2584 commented at 2011-10-12 19:21:01 » #900161

Rin - "Wow, I didn't know I swung this way."

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Rin_Tohsaka commented at 2013-03-11 00:21:31 » #1280909

But the skirt couldn't go much higher without ruining the zettai ryouiki.

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HaneHaiterun commented at 2013-07-28 10:37:21 » #1368582

I didn't notice the zettai ryouiki until you mentioned it, Rin_Tohsaka. Thank you for pointing it out.

This really is an amazing work. Saber's "moment of ecstasy" expression, with that mix of the slightest of pain (from clinging to the edge, I think) and pure bliss (for obvious reasons) really makes it great rather than good. Her toe-scrunch is proportional to her foot size, which is sadly not normally the case. While I cannot tell (due to the cross-hatching on the bed) if they are atop a duvet or other type of blanket or, instead, a bare mattress, Saber's right hand being clenched so tightly also adds to really "selling" the moment in time.

And as for Rin, she has the look of fierce intensity that is in keeping with her character down pat. And between her zettai ryouiki and the very subtle fire in her eyes as she inflicts such great pleasure to Saber also adds to all of it.

10 out of 10.

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