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brandonlee commented at 2009-07-29 21:46:27 » #85176

Oh.. My... God!

That is so fucking hot! Really, one of the best of the best EVER. But one thing, the translations don't seem too fitting.
Like, maybe Dawn is asking if May's close to her climax. And then May starts to say something, but gasps as Dawn hits her G-Spot. That'd be something I'd perfer.

11 Points Flag
Anonymous commented at 2009-08-18 05:52:39 » #96460

No one cares what you want, and a few other things:

1. Translations are for translating, not to give some crazed fanboy what he wants.
2. Keep your opinions to yourself, no body gives a damn about how attractive you find the characters in the pictures.
and 3. Dawn's grabbing her clitoris... not her G-Spot. That's located inside the vagina.

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brandonlee commented at 2009-09-10 20:58:36 » #109696

Alright, my mistake. May IS fingering herself. Ah, well...
I still think it's the best. And Anon1, I know what a translation is for. I was refering to what they're saying doesn't make much sense. I mean, look.

Dawn: Qui- Quickly.
May: Haaa. Fa- *Biku.*

What the living hell is that to mean? I just don't get it, so I said something that I thought would be more fitting if they said what I suggested. Despite the text, this is still hot beyond words!

10 Points Flag
Deuxsonic commented at 2009-09-10 21:02:45 » #109697

Finished the translation.

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Anonymous commented at 2010-07-18 01:39:31 » #368905

...Biku is a noise reference... *sigh* Like the "fa"... oh forget it... kids and hentai just don't mix...

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Anonymous commented at 2020-01-05 13:08:24 » #2477140

OMG, all of you guys arguing on every other pic makes it hard to enjoy them... I'd feel ashamed as the artist if I made it for the sake of some of you instead of my own. :p

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sasamisa commented at 2021-08-07 14:57:05 » #2637035

Corrected and updated everything to the best of my current ability (2 years hard revision at this point - getting very close to JLPT1 now). Feel free to comment if you think I've got anything seriously wrong. (^_^)

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