Since it's unfinished... to be continued.
"Amazing...!" Cinderella was surprised.
Under the witch's spell, Cinderella's clothers transformed into a beautiful dress.
"First off, we've got to do something about those clothes." And so saying, the witch used magic on Cinderella's clothing.
"Cinderella, you've always been a good girl. As a reward, I'll allow you to go to the ball ze." said the witch.
And right before Cinderella's eyes there appeared a witch riding on a broomstick.
Just as she was wondering where the voice came from, a blinding light shot towards Cinderella.
"Don't cry, Cinderella."
"I'd like to attend the ball too." But Cinderella didn't have a dress nor stuff to go with it, all she had were torn and dirty clothes. Cinderella became sad, and she sobbed and she wept.
Cinderella cleaned up her sisters' rooms just as they requested.
"Yes, Patchouli onee-sama, Flandre onee-sama." replied Cinderella.
"Cinderella, while we are away at the ball, make sure you clean up our rooms." said the two sisters.
Cinderella helped with her sisters' preparations, and saw the three of them off to the ball.
The stepmother very delightedly prepared dresses for the two elder sisters. Of course, she didn't care one bit about Cinderella at all.
One day, the lady of the mansion decided to hold a ball. Cinderella's two sisters were also invited.
Although the girl always wore tattered and dirty clothes, and was not allowed to take baths, she always preserved her own pride in her mind. Because it meant "falling ashes", the girl was always called by the name "Cinderella".
"Cinderella, can't you finish cleaning up a little faster?" The new mother was not pleased with the girl who was prettier than her own daughters. And so she constantly forced harsh chores unto the girl.
Once upon a time, there lived a beautiful and gentle girl. However, her mother had passed away, and because her father remarried, she came to have a new mother and two elder sisters. But all of them were very mean people.
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Anonymous commented at 2010-07-24 09:06:36 » #376687
Cool, I want more ^^
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