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Esper commented at 2010-12-08 18:27:09 » #536955

It was always interesting watching the prisoners resist before being brought into the tickle bay. It showed how new they were to the system. They never realized just how inevitable it was that they would have to endure their treatment. After all, they were prisoners here for a variety of crimes, did they think there would be no punishment?

This one was no different of course. Rebellious, a tinge of anger and frustration. All of that vanished as soon as the button was pushed. Her sudden flinching at the first touch of the machine was particularly revealing. Already she struggled not to smile and laugh but that soon became futile. She laughed and screamed, which was unfortunate, because it was only going to get worse.

More hands filled the chamber, and the bonds that held her grew tighter. Her laughter panicked as she squirmed and struggled, the machine finding every sensitive spot and tickling her to the point of sheer hysterics. She was delirious at this point, tears running down her cheeks as she gave into her punishment.

Hours would pass of course, and when she returned again and again, more would do so. As it did with everyone at the prison, for years to come. Perhaps then they would find ways to avoid being sent here, but until then: tickle, tickle, tickle~...

-Warden Eliza

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Zakuzelo commented at 2011-07-16 21:04:46 » #814390

It's comments like those that make me wish the comment search worked. That was very good.

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Anonymous commented at 2011-10-27 02:38:20 » #911075

It's comments like those that make me wonder why I read comments.

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Anonymous commented at 2014-06-28 22:58:43 » #1559762

...thank you, wow, so long ago. ♥ Still one of my favorite pieces by Rui.

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