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lixiaofossil commented at 2014-04-30 14:58:47 » #1527320
Personally, from the perspective of sexual stimulation, this is the best-produced Kotonoha's h-scene in original School Days, Summer Days and Cross Days.
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Personally, from the perspective of sexual stimulation, this is the best-produced Kotonoha's h-scene in original School Days, Summer Days and Cross Days.
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lixiaofossil commented at 2014-04-30 22:52:01 » #1527517
To the commenter above: Actually, I'm thinking about a hentai novel about this.
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To the commenter above: Actually, I'm thinking about a hentai novel about this.
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lixiaofossil commented at 2014-05-01 03:39:22 » #1527632
For anyone who is confused about the story, this is what happened: This section is called "reclamation", Makoto, who is always portrayed as an indecisive moron, feels guilty for cheating on Kotonoha and distances himself from her, especially when watching Yukki helps her in preparation of school festival. Meanwhile, seizing this chance, Ai Yamagata approaches Makoto, inviting him to the notorious "secret chamber". Acknowledged these, Yukki suggests Kotonoha to pretend flirting with her in front of Makoto and Ai, in order to distract Makoto and win him back. Kotonoha initially hesitates but later agrees to cooperate, so Yukki gropes and sucks her breasts, making her moans loudly (instinctively and deliberately), effectively disrupts Makoto and Ai. Then Yukki states a "switch", Makoto who is switched to Kotonoha, eager to taste her breasts as Yukki did, Kotonoha suddenly rings a bell, tells Makoto if he wants her breasts, then he must kiss her at first place...at last, Yukki's plan is a success, as Kotonoha reclaims Makoto back to her.
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For anyone who is confused about the story, this is what happened: This section is called "reclamation", Makoto, who is always portrayed as an indecisive moron, feels guilty for cheating on Kotonoha and distances himself from her, especially when watching Yukki helps her in preparation of school festival. Meanwhile, seizing this chance, Ai Yamagata approaches Makoto, inviting him to the notorious "secret chamber". Acknowledged these, Yukki suggests Kotonoha to pretend flirting with her in front of Makoto and Ai, in order to distract Makoto and win him back. Kotonoha initially hesitates but later agrees to cooperate, so Yukki gropes and sucks her breasts, making her moans loudly (instinctively and deliberately), effectively disrupts Makoto and Ai. Then Yukki states a "switch", Makoto who is switched to Kotonoha, eager to taste her breasts as Yukki did, Kotonoha suddenly rings a bell, tells Makoto if he wants her breasts, then he must kiss her at first place...at last, Yukki's plan is a success, as Kotonoha reclaims Makoto back to her.
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lixiaofossil commented at 2014-05-02 01:12:51 » #1528072
To the commenter above: Well, you know there's something called "jobbery", and there is another thing called "fan service". It was not me who wrote this stupid twist script.
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To the commenter above: Well, you know there's something called "jobbery", and there is another thing called "fan service". It was not me who wrote this stupid twist script.
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lixiaofossil commented at 2015-10-15 16:56:27 » #1831319
To the commenter above: I had begun novelization, but since my native language is Chinese, it will take time to write even a short passage in English. Also, I have to modify some contents.
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To the commenter above: I had begun novelization, but since my native language is Chinese, it will take time to write even a short passage in English. Also, I have to modify some contents.
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lixiaofossil commented at 2017-08-23 11:17:12 » #2160363
The best part of this scene is Kotonoha's expressions and reactions, which precisely reflect her psychological activities. First off, when Kotonoha and Yukki begin to pretend, her face is very reluctant, but after finding out Makoto is really distracted, there is a transitory smile. Next comes the most outstanding part: When Yukki gropes and sucks her left breast, Kotonoha moans and trembles with eyes closed, overcome by the intense pleasure she never feels before; then she opens her eyes to watch the boy who grabs and latches on her breast, we can see from her perspective, Yukki’s image gradually dissolves into Makoto’s, because she is desperately trying to think it is Makoto, not Yukki, is feeding on her breast, a clear indication of Kotonoha’s internal conflict between her love for Makoto and the undeniable, massive pleasant sensation generated by erogenous zones of hers being sexually stimulated; then there is a subtle change of her expression of watching Yukki, and we can feel her sorrow from it “why the one now groping and sucking my breast is not Makoto-kun/why you’re not Makoto-kun”. Later when Yukki presses his face against Kotonoha’s breast, her initially is astonished by the sudden, even more massive sexual pleasure, then almost immediately succumbs to it, as her expression is shocked them moans even louder and faces upwards with eyes closed.
Still, there are a few things can be improved: First, should be more detailed actions; second, Kotonoha should reach orgasm; third, her mammary glands should be lactating; fourth, well, the one who gropes and sucks her breast should be Makoto since she loves him too much.
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The best part of this scene is Kotonoha's expressions and reactions, which precisely reflect her psychological activities. First off, when Kotonoha and Yukki begin to pretend, her face is very reluctant, but after finding out Makoto is really distracted, there is a transitory smile. Next comes the most outstanding part: When Yukki gropes and sucks her left breast, Kotonoha moans and trembles with eyes closed, overcome by the intense pleasure she never feels before; then she opens her eyes to watch the boy who grabs and latches on her breast, we can see from her perspective, Yukki’s image gradually dissolves into Makoto’s, because she is desperately trying to think it is Makoto, not Yukki, is feeding on her breast, a clear indication of Kotonoha’s internal conflict between her love for Makoto and the undeniable, massive pleasant sensation generated by erogenous zones of hers being sexually stimulated; then there is a subtle change of her expression of watching Yukki, and we can feel her sorrow from it “why the one now groping and sucking my breast is not Makoto-kun/why you’re not Makoto-kun”. Later when Yukki presses his face against Kotonoha’s breast, her initially is astonished by the sudden, even more massive sexual pleasure, then almost immediately succumbs to it, as her expression is shocked them moans even louder and faces upwards with eyes closed.
Still, there are a few things can be improved: First, should be more detailed actions; second, Kotonoha should reach orgasm; third, her mammary glands should be lactating; fourth, well, the one who gropes and sucks her breast should be Makoto since she loves him too much.
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