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Anonymous commented at 2009-06-02 16:42:10 » #58783
Women like you arn't really new to me. With all the other ones I had, I never felt like getting my money's worth, but...I really, truly enjoyed the nights with you. I liked the way you walk. I like the way you talk to me. I like the way you smile, when you do your job. I like the way you...the way you taste. I liked the way you breath when you sleep, how your hair is spread over your face, your horns shining in the light of the sulphur flames...I like...I LOVE everything about you...
But I don't know how you feel. Am I but an employer to you? A costumer? A client? Were those nights meaningless to you? Was your smile, that beautiful smile, only a facade?
This letter also contains a small key for the small magic lock at the base of your tail. It will unlock it when the key is in close venicity.
And then, you can leave, never having to return. Or...
Or you can stay. With me. As a lover, not a concubine. You would never have to do that work, or any kind of work ever again. The mansion would be your home too. And I, I will always be there for you.
Please...Around dawn, tell me what your decision is. I will be in my room.
I will always love you,
Annaël
~By Mythic_Thael
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Women like you arn't really new to me. With all the other ones I had, I never felt like getting my money's worth, but...I really, truly enjoyed the nights with you. I liked the way you walk. I like the way you talk to me. I like the way you smile, when you do your job. I like the way you...the way you taste. I liked the way you breath when you sleep, how your hair is spread over your face, your horns shining in the light of the sulphur flames...I like...I LOVE everything about you...
But I don't know how you feel. Am I but an employer to you? A costumer? A client? Were those nights meaningless to you? Was your smile, that beautiful smile, only a facade?
This letter also contains a small key for the small magic lock at the base of your tail. It will unlock it when the key is in close venicity.
And then, you can leave, never having to return. Or...
Or you can stay. With me. As a lover, not a concubine. You would never have to do that work, or any kind of work ever again. The mansion would be your home too. And I, I will always be there for you.
Please...Around dawn, tell me what your decision is. I will be in my room.
I will always love you,
Annaël
~By Mythic_Thael
74 Points Flag
SleepingForest commented at 2010-06-24 23:23:58 » #343965
That was beautiful. Your writing reminds me of some of my old scripts. You've got talent and potential my friend :)
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That was beautiful. Your writing reminds me of some of my old scripts. You've got talent and potential my friend :)
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Anonymous commented at 2018-09-28 03:41:15 » #2285842
awwwww. i came up with a draft for a story like this some while ago of love between an angel 'breaking free' of a bad job in heaven and loving a demon girl, but i can't write so i didn't make it. i'm glad that daydream i had really does exist in some way with a great pic to go with it. this is beautiful. love the pockets of wholesome content here on gb, such a refresher from the garbage i have to sift through.
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awwwww. i came up with a draft for a story like this some while ago of love between an angel 'breaking free' of a bad job in heaven and loving a demon girl, but i can't write so i didn't make it. i'm glad that daydream i had really does exist in some way with a great pic to go with it. this is beautiful. love the pockets of wholesome content here on gb, such a refresher from the garbage i have to sift through.
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