Oots commented at 2022-11-18 01:29:12 » #2764257

Nice! You're getting there. Once you've added the van in the background later on, you can make the shadows on the hair and clothing darker while the highlights can be less bright because it's night time. Moonlight isn't that strong, usually.

You can also consider putting a bit of lipstick on Takashiro's upper lip and making Jody's cock slightly wet with saliva. You can see a bit of it in the reference image I sent you. Also, good job on reducing Takashiro's breast size. Thank you. I look forward to seeing the next draft from you

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